To My Dylan

A very true poem of mine. I hope to move you with it as Dylan did me

If I could take every beautiful moment I had with you And put it into one single breath I think I might die Not from happiness, no But from the excruciating pain I’d feel from knowing That I won’t ever have those moments again And people say that is the beauty of a moment But I tend to think otherwise Because it's what is in that moment that makes it beautiful Not the moment itself And so to put every picture I mentally took of you Gathered every feeling you ever made me experience And every way you slowly impacted my life Into one breath It would only be a solid reminder Of everything I have had to let go of And just how beautiful I truly thought you were To my Dylan I am forever grateful For the days you’ve spent with me Teaching me what it was to be happy And to be content with myself Waking up every morning With you next to me Has been the highlight of my days And every day, thank God To every secret you've shared with me To the beauty of silence when it is not necessary I thank you for the love you made me experience And teaching me the patience and understanding that love demands To every unexpected kiss you’d ever given me, As well as the ones I’d asked for For holding me with such sincerity And knowing exactly how to make me feel beautiful I am grateful to the ways that you had understood me And given me love When I needed it the most To every smile you awarded me with And every piece of strength you built me up upon To every fragment of attention You had blessed me with unconditionally And to every piece of your heart you unremorsefully gifted me with I am grateful To all of my life’s blessings But only because Each blessing Had led me To you

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Reviews

[SmittyJas]

What a fine tribute to Dylan he deserves it for loving you the way he did guiding you and molding you into the young woman you are today remember Dylan in your Prayers.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Awwww.... I can't express in words just how much this poem touched my heart. Very wonderfully and magically written! :)

[BreannaAutumn]

oh thank youu that means a lot to me:)

[wordwarrior]

Beautifully heartfelt writing filled with love and passion. Bravo!

[M. Stein]

This is extraordinary, I particularly liked the first three stances, I could literally feel the passion and love you have for Dylan. Very, very well written.

[BreannaAutumn]

thank you, I'm glad it affected you:)

[zainul]

Thanks for the read request.
I would miss the beads of pearl that dropped like tears from your eyes.
I became very emotional as I read the real story of your life with Dylan.
I thank Dylan for keeping you happy throughout your relationship.

[BreannaAutumn]

Thank you, I would hope he does as well. I'm glad it had an effect on you, theres only so many words to describe my deep love I had for him. I thank him as well..

[zainul]

You are most welcome.
I have no words to comfort you for the loss of love of him.
I am sure you can bear the pain caused by fate.

[BreannaAutumn]

Yes, poetry really helps in releasing the emotions

[zainul]

I agree with you.
I hope you are a little relaxed than ever.

[Vile]

This bleeds nostalgia, a fond memory of someone. Someone who helped shape and mold who you are today, and you convey that feeling very well. You unveil to us everything, and it was beautifully portrayed. :D

[BreannaAutumn]

awee thank you hah that means alot to me:)

[Amanda]

This is so beautiful and relatable. I was holding back my tears

[BreannaAutumn]

Thank you so much:) That means alot to me

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The endearment in your lines...I would of thought the tile be fitting:

To my Dylan

seems a personal affection of a write for him and only him in the lines of this narrative of spilled emotions as you just unleash every ounce of it on paper...