Subtle Sigh

Run rows the river's flood
Dark caps block the blood
Weighting countless bodies heap
Waves sing and walls leak
Bludgeons lovely crowd the mock
Twining waves grain the lock
Rocks grind the soft swimming
Rain blocked the lake skimming
Sorrowing lies blow the days
Down they wait until they stay
Monsoon red, drops of rain
Broken bonds lightly vain
Sprinkling love touched by fear
Popping pond circles near
Anecdote square lies beside
Sides by two together hide
Purple water safely rings
Forest surrounding like a king
Waters bow, horizon hails
Sky the night forever pails
Moons sway ocean veins
Blue beach dimly stains
Nature hails mountains by
Harmony surrounds, all sigh

Reviews

[Hyatt Vincent]

This poem sends my mind everywhere! I love how even though it's chaotic and doesn't make sense... somehow, it still does. Well written also, as usual (:

[emma]

well said, descriptive, nice flow. really, i loved it . . . especially the line "weighting countless bodies heap" it really stood out.