Five Days

Five Days

A Story by Brian
"

This is just something random I cooked up and spewed out. It's a little different from what I usually do, but i enjoyed the outcome.

"

Day One:

I look down the street and see him staring at me.  He's tall and wearing a white cloak.  I

can't make out his face.  His arms cross his chest as though he rests in a coffin, and in his

right hand rests a long sickle.  Nobody can see him but me.  The masses shamble past as though

he weren't even there.  Even though I can't see his eyes, I know they mark me.  For what?  I'm

afraid.  I run and make it away, and soon lose the incident in the mayhem of daily life.

Day Two:

I see him again, in my dreams.  He follows me through the crowds, and I can only move as if

through deep water.  The people part for him, making a path right to me.  There's no escape. 

He grips the scythe with both hands and approaches.  I awake.  The rest of the day passes in

fear of the creature, but I don't see him again.  Maybe it was all just a bad dream after all.

Day Three:

The demon waits for me at the bus stop!  Just when I thought it might be over and I might be

safe.  He raises an arm and beckons me with a slender finger.  Fear takes me and I turn around,

pushing back through the crowds on the sidewalk.  I look over my shoulder and see the tall

figure pursuing me slowly.  He glides through the people effortlessly, and I can only hope that

he doesn't reach me before I escape.  Nearer and nearer he comes, his hand yearning for me.  I

break from the crowd and sprint off, not daring to look behind me, only stopping when I think

I've escaped once again.  But I can never be sure.

Day Four:

Is there no solace?  I open the door and see him across the street.  My only option is to run

and lose him in the streets.  He slowly turns his head and watches me flee.  I pass alley after

alley, and he stands in each one to tell me how futile this is.  I see him in the crowds again,

and I see him down the street.  He takes long strides after me, but I spot a large cathedral

and enter inside.  I collapse in the aisle and pull myself into a pew as the sun sets and stops

projecting through the stained glass windows.  Exhaustion overcomes me and I cry myself to

sleep.

Day Five:

I wake up in the church, but I know I'll find no sanctuary here.  The tears have stopped

streaming, and my heart is too tired to beat fear through my veins.  The doors to the chapel

open.  I can't gasp, can't breathe.  A hand touches my shoulder lightly, and I know it's the

end.

© 2009 Brian


Author's Note

Brian
Should it end the way it does? I didn't stop to think much on the "plot," but maybe there's a better way to run the whole idea.

My Review

Would you like to review this Story?
Login | Register




Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

98 Views
Added on January 24, 2009

Author

Brian
Brian

About
Not much to say. I enjoy writing, although a lot of what I come up with I pull from the World of Darkness universe. I've got some other stuff as well, but some of that still shows the WoD influence. more..

Writing
Encounter Encounter

A Story by Brian