I shouldn't have believed her

I shouldn't have believed her

A Poem by OutSpoken
"

R.I.P

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With tears in her eyes
A smile ghosting her face
It was in this moment
She said she was okay
She told me she'll be fine
While looking into my eyes
A part of me didn't believe her
I pushed the thought away
Maybe if I'd paid more attention
She'd still be alive today
Her depression was like a cancer
It slowly ate away her sanity
Yet still she wore her mask
Pretended like everything was alright
Knowing that it wasn't.

© 2017 OutSpoken


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It is so hard dealing with depression, there seems to be no hope, or light at the end of the tunnel. There is nothing you could of done or said to have stopped her. I hope you don't blame yourself? I had a similar situation with a friend. Its horrible and sad. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Wow! So sad the effects of depression and ultimately suicide.

Posted 6 Years Ago


It is so hard dealing with depression, there seems to be no hope, or light at the end of the tunnel. There is nothing you could of done or said to have stopped her. I hope you don't blame yourself? I had a similar situation with a friend. Its horrible and sad. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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