Suffocation

Suffocation

A Poem by Briesaddiction
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A poem about unrequited love

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Funny how good intentions
a lot of the time have bad results
silly how I want you and you want me
but you like to front so no one can see
makes no sense to me how
you loved me then
but don't love me now
When I showered you in love
you weren't supposed to drown

© 2014 Briesaddiction


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Very nice poem. I love how you played with irony. That is something I do as well :)

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Added on January 26, 2014
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Briesaddiction
Briesaddiction

philadelphia, PA



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I'm relatively young, I live in Philadelphia. Poetry is my outlet for my bad romances more..

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