Heaven

Just a little haiku

I’m lost in the dark,

I can’t feel my heart beating,

This must be Heaven. 

Author's Note

Just a literary doodle, haha.

Reviews

[ReadsAtDances]

Huh. Very interesting. I clicked on this expecting an upbeat, happy little haiku, but that is not what I found. I'm kind of glad for that, actually, because this version is more thought provoking, more "down to earth" if you will. Thanks for the poem.

[Britaini Gross]

I am glad that you enjoyed it.

[Flopp]

Yet again ReadsAtDances, You amaze me with your "punny" references :)

[Quill]

.......or it could be hell?

[Flopp]

Haha! I was expecting it to be a deep thought provoking poem, but it turned out to be short and equally thought provoking! Was not expecting that :)

[Britaini Gross]

Thank you.