Confined.

Trapted in confines of me, myself and I
Weaving delusions into the fabrics of my mind
A little girl hidind behind evil eyes
A wish to pause, fast forward, rewind
Memories laced through the webs of my veins
A pen put to paper, meant to draw

Only To Trace.

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

Enjoyed the pacing, just thinkin if this is based on one thing or tother?

[Brittney]

Thank you, and it is purely based on my soul, a look behind my eyes.

[lyricalprince]

this is rare that I say this but this is one of the best and clever I have ever read keep up the good work!

[Brittney]

Your review made my day thank you again for such kind words

[Rob Santana]

Cool piece, I like the second to the last stanza, clever wording. A few grammar corrections and it will be niceLy polished.

[LightforChrist]

I love this poem! You have perfectly explained how it might feel for someone to be confined by something, especially their own mind. Great Job and I can't wait to read more of your work in the future! :)

[Brittney]

Thank you very much!

[Jennifer McQueen]

Really like your flow throughout this - it's different and refreshing. Nice to see a unique voice among a sea of generic ones. Well done.

[Brittney]

Thank you!!