Monotone Sonata

This is a short poem about not giving up on love even if it's futile and even if in the end you'll probably still loose.

Alternate reality

filled with you and me

Daydreams of love and peace

but what is this aching that will not cease

Forbidden glances

My heartbeat, it prances

Forced smiles

as the realization piles

That you and me aren't meant to be

It was always clear to see

Even so I would hate

to submit to that kind of fate

A discord if what isn't true

even so I will fight against the odds for you

Author's Note

If you would please, read it out loud and tell me how it sounds? If it flows smoothly or if it's choppy or anything you notice with the fluidity of the poem.

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[Bear]

I use Natural Reader text to speech software to read my work out loud to myself, you can download it for free at http://www.naturalreaders.com/ it is a great writing tool.