Writers Block

Writers Block

A Poem by Brook
"

don't you owe it to me?

"
I've got half written poems 
floating through my 
brain, attempting to put 
something together
is driving me insane.

Poetry, poetry, 
don't you owe it to me? 
Just to work instantly just 
this one time. No fussing, or faffing,
just bloody rhyme.

© 2014 Brook


Author's Note

Brook
I have writers block right now, i can't write anything. I am annoyed that i cannot, and ended up with this. I know it's terrible, but hey, cut me some slack.

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That first stanza is like perfection. I don't know how else to even some up writers block, I wish i would have wrote it. This is the third poem I've read so far and I love the way you rhyme.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Brook

9 Years Ago

Writers block is a pain in the a*s lol. I'm happy you enjoyed it :)
That was an enjoyable read. The right length.


If you want some actual sincerity, a lot of it's to do with sincerity itself:

Just being able to think of a set of ideas isn't what's usually the problem, it's the tangible issue of size - a person, who just wants to tell a story often can, it's that they're having to expand vastly on technically only so much that's necessary to tell.



The Representative, (my text) for example.....to sincerely tell it, all that actually I needed to say exceeded no more than 4,500 words - despite at one time having existed at over 70,000!!



First, when tackling this issue, resort always to asking: what is it that only you wish to say?



And you do rhyme well.



Posted 9 Years Ago


Brook

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the advice, and for reading.
╰☆╮I had writers block, sort of, for a few weeks. Simply didn't feel like writing at all. So I fully understand and relate to this.╰☆╮

Posted 9 Years Ago


Brook

9 Years Ago

It's difficult dealing with it. It just drives you mad. I wanted to write, but i couldn't but i kept.. read more
Brittany Zedalis

9 Years Ago

Usually when that happens to me, I just put the pen down and do something else for a few weeks and i.. read more
Ahhh writer's block. A writer's worst enemy. I have experienced this from time to time and it drives me nuts as well! Walking away for awhile and coming back to it later helps me out a lot. :)

~Stefanie

Posted 9 Years Ago


Brook

9 Years Ago

thank you :)
Been there done that. Every writer experience this, it still is nicely written. Well-expressed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Brook

9 Years Ago

Thanks haha. :)
Mirra

9 Years Ago

Welcome :-)
Hey this is pretty good! I'm quite sure we can all relate! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Brook

9 Years Ago

Haha, thank you. I'm sure we can.
It isn't terrible at all!

I LOVED this.

Writer's block kept bugging me for two months! So I cant totally relate to this!

Well done. Well said!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Brook

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
Two months? WOW.
Ohemmgeee, Brooook! You can't have writers block, what am I gonna do???? Oh noooo!!!!

On a serious not, just chill out and don't force it, your words will come running back to you!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Brook

9 Years Ago

I will, i'm sure my brain will get its butt in gear soon.
Hahaha!! Give your mind a chance, it will get there. I'm sure we can all relate to this, my dear! Great job expressing your lack of being able to write poetry through poetry! ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Brook

9 Years Ago

Thank youuuu. I will give my mind time to rest haha.
Don't worry give your mind a chance and let it relax own its own, after little rest he will be back to work:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Brook

9 Years Ago

I shall. Thank you.

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Brook
Brook

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