dear first love

dear first love

A Poem by Winnter
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He may never see this

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dear first love ,
how can I possibly describe how you have affected my life.
We dated young and fell apart.
We reunited and you broke my heart.

We have a routine where you say "I love you"
I let you hold me with hands that have no good intentions.
I trust you.
Again
And again.

When I don't give you what you want I say "I love you" and you say it back in a way no one could count as sincere.

You text me later saying that you don't love me and apologize.
Then you move on.

and when you see me talking with another guy... you act as if you own me.

you touch me whenever you want for the simple excuse of "cuz I wanted to."

So dear first love, I wish you would've never became the person you are today.

Sincerely,
B.

© 2017 Winnter



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Gee
No pleasing some men, ain't happy with what they've got, then ain't happy with what they ain't got being with another fella. If they're gonna be like this then best then being a player.
Enjoyed the read winnter with two enns

Posted 6 Days Ago


Winnter

6 Days Ago

Thank you.
Gee

6 Days Ago

My pleasure
The first love never forgotten. But with time. We shall remember the good days and forget the bad days. I liked your thoughts and the honest ending. Thank you Winnter for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Days Ago


Winnter

6 Days Ago

Thank you.
Coyote Poetry

6 Days Ago

You are welcome.
That was very strong, u were basically talking to the ex!!! And not letting him get the best of you great job!!!

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Justin

1 Week Ago

Your welcome amazing job!!! I wrote a poem similar to this!!!
Winnter

1 Week Ago

I will go check it out!
Justin

1 Week Ago

Thanks 😃😃 i hope u like it
So much pain, yet so unfortunately easy to relate to.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Winnter

1 Month Ago

True true.
Disappointing behaviors. Sadly distressing

Great and honest read

Matthew

Posted 1 Month Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Winnter

1 Month Ago

Thank you
And yes it is
Matthew Kult

1 Month Ago

You are welcome

Matthew

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