Another heartbreak kid

When i rode with you i smiled.
When i laid in your arms i felt safe.
When we kissed i felt like nothing could hurt me.
When we laughed together i admired your soul..
When i spoke of you it was words of praise.
When we got drunk together...
I fell and cried and told you i loved you. Whcih wasn't a lie.
Spiritually i felt like you were the one...
You didnt want to be in a relationship since you're joining the army...
But you looked me in the eyes.
And you told me you loved me too.
And then we had sex.
For me it was new and i trusted you...
But after that night.
When i woke up next to you i was happy.
But you began to ignore me.
When you wouldn't respond i worried but keot my distance.
When i would send goodmorning and goodnight i would get no response.
And a few weeks later.
In current time.
You were in bed with another girl.
For i was used.
I am hurt. Beyond repair.
You couldnt be a man and tell me you used me.
I hate you.
From deep within my heart. I wanted to treat you right and make you happy.
I hate you.
I hate you.

Reviews

[Onlyme]

This is sad happens to so many people, wanting to be loved and finding it and ending up feeling used and abused and then getting tossed away to the kerb. Rejected, hurt, angry and used. Nicely written and expressed. Says it all.

[genocide]

this is a story about heartbreak and looking for love and getting used and fucked over it's written very well

[Winnter]

thank you and it truly is.

[genocide]

indeed im going to read more of your writing my dear