oh you poor fool

draw moonlight from my eyes
and sunlight from my skin.
treat me as if i were the stars in the sky on a sad summers night.
let me fill your thoughts that haunt you in your car on your way home.
allow me to show you how islt feels to be treated the same as you treat others.
fool yourself into falling into the abyss of naivity.
oh you poor fool! for how you wept.
you act as if you are the only important being on this planet while you make your lovers feel irrelevant.
oh you poor fool for how you cant see,
karma is afoot.
creeping behind you.
hidden behind blue eyes, auburn hair, and a smile that can kill.
hold my hands as we lay by the ocean, how do you feel?
i love you too.

Reviews

[Chris]

I liked the way it drew me in... and the thoughts it brought.

[Winnter]

Thank you :)

[genocide]

an emontial rollercoaster all the way as these lovers are together as karma is creeping up on them

[Winnter]

Indeed it is

[wordman]

an emotional rollercoaster

[Onlyme]

I could really feel the harrowing emotions inside this deep, thought-filled sad poem. Well written. And heartfelt.

[Winnter]

thank you so much