Just Breath

bassicly saying breath

Just breath . Take a breath. Breath slowly but deeply. The water frezes your skin. You say ouch I say breath. You die slowly well i turn into a vampire. Breath! Breath! Slowly you die and slowly I change. Breath! Breath! What's happening you say, I say your dieing. Slowly you die and slowly I change. You drown, I swim. Come help me is what i hear you say. I say drown and die. Breath slowly but deeply. You say what are you? I say I'm your worst nightmare. You scream, I laugh. Help me you shout. I chuckel and say no one can hear you. Breath! Breath! Breath slowly but deeply. You drown and I change. You scream through the wind, loudly. I laugh and say no one can hear you give up. Breath! Breath! You die and I leave.

Author's Note

hope u like it

Reviews

[Pookie]

Kinda scary. Lol. But its really good and I found only one in correction. I chuckel and say no one can hear you. Chuckel is spelled Chuckle lol. And it was really good. I love it!!! Read my Poem I am Which I am The grim Reaper. Plzxs

[Casper Cross]

Thought it was very beautiful... well put together.