Notes from a Nobody

Notes from a Nobody

A Poem by Asante.

Frigid
fell your heart
where it wove together
equal ends arctic and antarctic.

Artfully, I might add.

Love
landed here
in my opened hand
as a minor key piano triad.

Singing t'ward the broken.

© 2016 Asante.



Author's Note

Asante.
To be broken.

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Hello Sante, what a sheer pleasure to read your first work, I feel like you were creating something truly magnificent through your word choices... You made love a bird that lands on your palms with mysterious thoughts... The ending was so beautifully done with a superb phrase... Well done mate...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asante.

2 Months Ago

What a wonderful review. I really appreciate you taking the time to give my work an honest look, and.. read more



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I really like this poem. It makes me feel like i can hear the piano playing in the back ground.
I loved the last few lines the most.
Well done!

Posted 3 Hours Ago


I feel the pain you painted with words. Your poem was short but just enough. Slightly bittersweet as I feel like being broken is okay but when you bring poetry into it, the pain and hurting eases a little. Even if temporarily

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asante.

2 Weeks Ago

You aren't at all wrong. To be broken gives one the chance to reconfigure the pieces into something .. read more
Emotion, raw and so real it reaches into you. That closing line is a money shot. You are truth and I dig it so much. Starz

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asante.

2 Months Ago

I really appreciate those words, good lady. So genuine – many thanks!
"Love
landed here
in my opened hand
as a minor key piano triad."
Superb thoughts!
Never thought of love from that angle.. Nice reading it ☺

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asante.

2 Months Ago

Different perspectives are everything. :)
I appreciate your words!
YumnaKay

2 Months Ago

I agree! You are most welcome ☺
Hello Sante, what a sheer pleasure to read your first work, I feel like you were creating something truly magnificent through your word choices... You made love a bird that lands on your palms with mysterious thoughts... The ending was so beautifully done with a superb phrase... Well done mate...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asante.

2 Months Ago

What a wonderful review. I really appreciate you taking the time to give my work an honest look, and.. read more
This piece is badass! You tapped into something special on this one man. Great stuff!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asante.

3 Months Ago

Glad you enjoyed! Many thanks, brother.
Short and yet so emotional. I could feel the weight of each word as I read it. Beautifully crafted, you surely have a way with words. Always a pleasure to read.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asante.

3 Months Ago

Thank you, Elizabeth. Always a pleasure having you stop in to give what I've written a look. :)
Sante, you totally take emotion and give it a horizon of scope and depth, wow. Beautifully done hon :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asante.

3 Months Ago

Thank you, Pop. :)
I never say this, but... You have a fan Sante. Your work is raw and real and emotional, a fiery mix of the elements of human emotions and thoughts. You dare to step out of the box and dare to say what you mean and mean what you say and I appreciate that rare quality when I sense it..

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

M. L. F.

4 Months Ago

Keep writing Sante.
..Misty
Asante.

4 Months Ago

Wonderful commentary from you, Misty. Absolutely wonderful, and I appreciate that the words I've put.. read more
M. L. F.

4 Months Ago

Thanks Sante. I like to read writers with fire. I don't find them often, but when I do I am sure t.. read more
this is a wonderful short piece...very artful, inviting for many interpretations...depending upon which keys we hit in our interpretations...love the last line...wish i had written that one.

j.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Asante.

4 Months Ago

The open interpretations make it more fun for the reader, I'd hope! I appreciate you stopping by, Ja.. read more

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Added on September 2, 2016
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