Turning Point

Turning Point

A Poem by Don Shaw
"

A path of judgement, could very well lead to redemption

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            Turning Point

                          Turn to the Father, kneel before His loving throne.
                          The heart of America bleeds, hear sounds of painful moans.
                          Turn to the Father, kneel before His loving throne.
                          We became to accepting, seeds of wickedness being sewn.
                          Turn to the Father, kneel before His loving throne.
                          Darkness are our skies, where His light had always shone.
                          Turn to the Father, kneel before His loving throne.
                          Lustful fires begin to burn, as we cast Him from our home.
                          Turn to the Father, kneel before His loving throne.
                          Repent from our wicked ways, and exit His judgement zone.
                          Turn to the Father, kneel before His loving throne.
                          Or stay on the sinful path, and be picked off by a drone.

© 2013 Don Shaw


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Rich imagery of gold and white painted cathedral ceilings, coupled with Gregorian chants echoing through the halls of time, as scenes of man's wickedness and the untold beauty of redemption flicker swiftly by, and a voice...your voice, is heard saying, "Turn to the Father...." calmly, with not judgement, but certainty. Beautifully done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Highly motivated spiritual penance, expressed with a rhyme scheme that is subtle yet intently creative, powerfully expressed, I like this a lot.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Don Shaw

11 Years Ago

thanks

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Added on January 2, 2013
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Tags: God, judgement, salvation, repentance

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Don Shaw
Don Shaw

San Angelo, TX



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