The Warrior

The Warrior

A Story by BrynnaW.

     The warrior defends her land with the greatest honor. She fights in every battle and never leaves a dying friend. Her eyes are fixed on her opponent while her hand unsheathes her sword. She strikes the man across his legs so that he can't walk. The warrior's glare pierced sharply into his eyes as she plunged her sword into his chest. She kicked him off the end of her sword and brought out her bow and arrow. The quiver always left her mark on the land because hers was purple. She pulled the string back with an arrow and released it. The arrow spun its way to an enemy on higher ground and dove into his throat. Then, suddenly, someone hit her from behind with their sword. The warrior cried out as her back bled. Still, she kept her back straight and prepared to fight the man. Her sword was still red from another man's blood but she paid no attention to it. The man dove at her with his sword but she dodged and dug her elbow into his back. He fell on his stomach and quickly got back up before the warrior could strike again. They started to fight again. The warrior matched her foot work with his and at the right moment, she twisted around and cut her sword into his side. He fell again but did not get up. The warrior was focused on the man when an arrow of a blue tinge spun toward her. She screamed as the arrow made its way into her chest. She fell next to the man she killed and saw something different about him... The warrior recognized him from somewhere... This man she had just killed, he was her brother.

© 2011 BrynnaW.


Author's Note

BrynnaW.
I know how they got separated do you?? :) Make up your own way on how she and her brother were split. If you want me to add more to this put it in your review. I will probably end up telling you how they got separated and ended up at this point. What did you think? Hope you enjoyed it!

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Nice one...would develop wonderfully into a full story. You should continue writing it! I believe they were split at birth, raised as warriors, but within separate cities. The mother was forced to give up her children in order to save them. There are so many options!

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This is very interessting. I would enjoy reading more. very nice

Posted 12 Years Ago


love it, and thanks for entering it into my contest!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved the surprise ending but would like to know more! Please keep on penning.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loving this more than ever! Best one, yet!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice one...would develop wonderfully into a full story. You should continue writing it! I believe they were split at birth, raised as warriors, but within separate cities. The mother was forced to give up her children in order to save them. There are so many options!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good. You're writing just keeps getting better, I swear! I like the twist ending, but I'll admit I have no idea as to how the two got separated. My imagination is intimidated by your awesome story :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

loving it

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fantastic stuff!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great story

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow such a good story! Write more, write more, write more, WRITE MORE!

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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