Hoods

     They walked calmly to me while humming. Their hoods hung low over their eyes and their coats dragged on the ground. The humming began low and quiet but as it grew louder, it started to sound like bees or static. My head swooned as they formed a circle around me. A hooded man to my left smiled to show his gray teeth. I heard a snarl from the man and the hooded figures pressed into me. There was no way out and the air seemed to be sucked out of me. I fell at the figures feet and when I looked up, I saw their faces. Gray teeth, black eyes, and pale faces. They threw their coats to block out the sky and they leaned over me. I screamed and everything went dark.

Author's Note

I know it is extremely short but I hope you liked it!

Reviews

[Daytonight]

This is a thriller! So very terrifying. Keep on penning.

[Kat Collins]

Beginnings of a great story! The power of the hooded men....nothing but evil. No redemption to be found.

[TheElfPrincess]

Scary..., especially that last sentence. Well written, I liked it.

[Hunter C. Brown]

cool, different kind of thing than u usually write, good job!!! keep on writing