Shattered Dreams

Shattered Dreams

A Poem by BrynnaW.

My dreams were shattered,
Shattered like a glass crashing to the ground,
And like rain falling onto the cement.
My dreams were bright,
Bright like the light bulb over my head,
Or like the sun beating down on my back.
My dreams had put me to work,
Work for several hours a day without a break,
And it forced me to go beyond my own mind.
My dreams were kept a secret,
A secret like the feeling you bottled up inside,
Or like the things you do because you are ashamed.
My dreams were pointless,
Pointless like the hope it brought,
But, most of all, they were pointless like this poem.

© 2011 BrynnaW.


Author's Note

BrynnaW.
It didn't come out like it had in my mind. In my mind I described everything but oh well. I don't know if you'll like this but I hope so! :)

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Oh... a poem is never pointless. Somehow and in some way it is the echoe from a chamber in your heart, crying to be put into words

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow.. so... beautiful! i really hope your dreams arent shattered!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It reminds me of a story almost, like someone telling somebody a secret they aren't supposed to tell, but instead of a secret, its a dream.
Very intesting take on things. I enjoyed it :)

- Forever Mine

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked the form you took with it. Really made it interesting. Keep up the great work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very nice work
loved it

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice work, i very nice write. and u said u weren't good at poetry

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's fine! funny how we can take another "road" when we start to write. I's good.
*bird*

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Totally loved this. The first sentence is so beautiful and it turned out very well. I really enjoyed this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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