Lost Light

Lost Light

A Poem by BrynnaW.
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A poem I wrote in fourth grade or maybe third....

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One light, shines white,
On the only night,
When I thought I knew,
What I was meant to do,
But now it's dark, I can't see
Because my life's unclear.

Clouded by so many fears
Gone now, I've lost my light
There's no way I can find my way
I've waited so long to leave this world I've known.

Now I'm lost, the rain has come
Now I don't know where to go
The color's fading fast
Along this broken path
I follow it hoping soon I will find my light.

I was told when a star is lit you're there
But now I don't see any stars so your gone, your gone
You left me alone to lose my faith
With the darkness closing in on me
I'm lost without the light.

© 2011 BrynnaW.


Author's Note

BrynnaW.
I wrote it a long time ago and HeartOfStars said that I should post it... So, I hope you liked it!

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Very well done! You did a great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I'm glad you followed my advice. It's so sweet. Well done :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow I love it. Even more impressive that you were a third grader.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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