Dear Society

Dear Society

A Poem by O Bubbly_snowflake *
"

*Edited for college newspaper submission. DESPERATE FOR REVIEWS*

"

Dear Society, 

I have a small message for you.


You see, 

all those lies will never be true.


To fit-in, 

I must live in front of the dressing table. 


Eliminate flaws, 

and fit into a size 6 designer label. 


I did 

all you insisted and so much more. 


It changed 

me inside and out to fit a foreign decor


The lies- 

now indistinguishable from the truth


The honesty-

Stripped from my once pure youth


Should I 

be grateful for the sheep I have grown to be?


Should I

embrace this voice-less existence and just agree?


I write

to you with fragments of gratitude.


Individuality gone, 

all that remains is a sheep's attitude. 



© 2011 O Bubbly_snowflake *



Author's Note

O Bubbly_snowflake *
So I revised an old poem called 'dear life' and i intend to send this to a college news paper and i want every little bit of help i can get to polish it up.
But first of all, I want to know your opinion on if i should send it or not?

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

This is a very outspoken piece that gives another voice to the "sheep" of society. I think you should send it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Love this creativity. I love how you are writing ot life itself for messing things up and leaving you feel like a lost lamb. Just another sheep among the masses. Great inspiring piece.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 6 Years Ago



Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

284 Views
2 Reviews
Rating
Added on November 21, 2010
Last Updated on May 20, 2011
Previous Versions

Author

O Bubbly_snowflake *
O Bubbly_snowflake *

Auckland, New Zealand



About
Expressively speechless. Photogenically blind. Contently lost in the storm of adolescence. I'm a 15 year old girl (so still in school! ^^), and I love to write. (obviously!) I was born in India, an.. more..

Writing