Come

 

 

 

 

Come

and greet the dozens of me

but don’t fear clarity of my facets

‘cause they are the finality of my focus equation

they are the sweet seeds of my life’s situation

 

And there’s no need for a spot light

the sight of each ‘me’ has it’s own BRIGHT

sometimes they each collide and fight

but the struggle isn’t one of violence

more like a collage of more than one deafening silence

of my soul comfortably losing control of self

and becoming an ever changing CALM

 

Come

and love the hundreds of me

better place your lungs in strength training

‘cause the marrow of my passion’s might

magnify’s my desire to maul each and every wall

to a point

just please don’t anoint

me as the one who enjoys that type of repetitive destruction

cause with each brick that falls,

the impact’s pain has a mutual call

 

And there’s no need to fear what we reveal

the freedom of each you is sure to appeal

sometimes each flaw is proof of perfection

but to accept is just the beginning true direction

towards that purpose that sings to both YOU and I

longing to become that canvas of a possible US

and appreciate the resulting sensual celebration

Reviews

[Li Li]

I can see a lot of Spirituality behind this piece. When I listen further to what this piece speaks, I see a person that doesn't love the "light" but has plenty of "light". There are many of "us" within. I say that personality can be chameleon. Most of the time there is a side of you that the other side chooses to debate. Sometimes that is a positive struggle leading to a better self. When we look at our flaws, seeing perfection, we then value who we truly are. Everybody has a story.... and something has to tell that story. Therefore, flaws are just filled pages.

This was a mind provoking piece. It's quite the emotion when you are able to fully be in harmony from within.

Bless!

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Dope! Very metaphorically driven piece. That's the beautiful thing about poetry. You can speak volumes about a subject mysteriously and intelligently with an underlining meaning that few will understand completely! Sex, love, murder, death....... The greats speak of these subjects so intelligently and poetically that you almost lose yourself within the subject. Even here, where you're clearly speaking of sex(not isolated), it's still something to be appreciated by all and still give the ladies a little shock to the leg! Very clever and entertaining piece B!

[Poetic82]

Nice...
but to accept is just the beginning true direction
towards that purpose that sings to both YOU and I
longing to become that canvas of a possible US
and appreciate the resulting sensual celebration.

To love without boundaries, criticism or confusion. yeah, I'd come..I mean yeah why wouldn't I? hehe. I mean come there. LOL. yeah, it can be misconstrued. Gread read.

[The Mad Prophet]

I am guessing this poems about how people see you as a person who knows how to get the point across. Even when that means hurting someone, or offending. You wield the double edge sword called Truth. I like this poem, truth is important to wield.