Forever More

Forever More

A Chapter by Bunnycorn
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Fun fact: I love Devils. Not so much demons, but Devils, and Succubi. This is by far my favorite poem in the series.

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Forever More (Sequal to "A Monster" part 2)

Forever more a warrior.
Never more that weak and defenceless girl that she had been.
She had been hunted, beaten, her parents murdered, her siblings taken.
She had been too weak, too weak to save her parents.
She late been too save her siblings.
It had been many years since she had seen her siblings.
She thought that when she did it would be a happy day.
But she had been too late.
When she finally got to them,
they were broken.
They had attacked her.
She had no choice but to kill them.
It had saddened her.
It had broken what was left of her icy heart.
And from there...
She became a warrior.
Forever hating the humans.
Living among them only when she must.
She had become what they had wanted.
A monster, free of all emotions.
She killed without remorse.
She killed without reason.
She didn't care whether you were weak or you were strong.
She struck back against the race that had cost her so much.
She did not fear death.
She embraced it,
Challenged it to come and get her.
And it eventually did.
She had accidently sliced her wrists.
She was going to die.
She did not regret her life.
She had no regrets.
She was forever a warrior.
She was a monster.
She hadn't been born this way.
She had been created.
So she forever more traveled among the devils.
She was hailed as their queen.
And she was finally happy.
She was finally loved.



© 2010 Bunnycorn



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I don't necessarily like it as an epic poem but I feel that everyone just dissects pieces on this site (which isn't bad) but I think this is simply a cool story.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Someone needs a hug. D****T DON'T YOU KNOW WHAT A HUG IS! YOU SHOULD GET ONE SOMETIME!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I hope that's better..>.< Sorry~

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Andrew Nelson Stewart Andrew Nelson Stewart
In poetry and to find answers of who we are while walking the ephemeral road upon cracks of pain signs leading you.
Interesting poem. Seems to be about the pains of life and trying to find acceptance but failing in that you let your heart harden.

I would recommend some grammatical corrections, especially with the to's and too's as I found myself slightly confused in the beginning verses.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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A band of soldiers finds diplomacy in the dreg forest comes with consequences.

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Added on September 19, 2010
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Tags: Dark, sad, young girl, brutality, murder, killing, rage, hate, love.


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Bunnycorn
Bunnycorn

Auburn, WA



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