Summer Song

Summer Song

A Poem by Sbernie18

Blame it on the entrance,

Yeah, you know she made it,

 Cause she’s always smiling at you.

 

Blame it on the music,

Yeah, the rhythm’s blinding,

But she’s only dancing with you.

 

Fight to be the one that,

Holds her up and shows her,

What there is yet to do.

 

Gently start all over,

Quiet beneath the summer,

There is so much left for you.

 

© 2011 Sbernie18


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this flows beautifully, like that soft summer breeze.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like this writing nice job (:

Posted 7 Years Ago


wonderfull poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


You write very well. I do not find much fault with your writing. I like it very much, instead.

Posted 7 Years Ago


lovely!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Real nice. Got a good beat to it. I liked it

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very pretty. Nice write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This was very sweet indeed. Competing to be the one who cherishes her heart with one dance...magnificent.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Sbernie18
Sbernie18

Syracuse, NY



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Hey, I'm from Syracuse. I write poetry, lyrics, a few short stories and longer stuff. I try to be as active as possible and review what I can. I love reading new poems and stories everyday so send me .. more..

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