I Dreamt of Peace

I Dreamt of Peace

A Poem by Sbernie18

I dreamt of peace and lasting days,

I dreamt of you, but in my haze,

I couldn’t recall the words you said,

Not a single book that we had read,

Nor a single sound of your faint laugh,

A blush, a smile on your behalf,

The tide that carried a distant swim,

Of distant words beneath the brim,

But I do recall the fading glance,

That day destroyed without a chance.

© 2011 Sbernie18


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Excellent..I love to dream of peace,all time
i dreamt of you ,the words were faint
could not recall what you said or what i
the tide was high ,too high for a swim
it swollowed all words,and the fading glance
everything destroyed ,could never stand a chance
and i knew its just a dream,that could never come true
peace is just a dream ,the real world is the stupid reality
lovely write..

Posted 7 Years Ago


There are no words for how much I like this poem.
Reminds me much of myself, and how fast I forget such pleasant memories and rather remember what made them come to end.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love the mood and the message of this poem.
The sense of mystery relayed in this poem is nice.

Posted 7 Years Ago


very good. i like the way it rymes. well done...

Posted 7 Years Ago


This has a hint of nostalgia and bittersweetness that makes it very heart felt

Posted 7 Years Ago


So sad...but very enjoyable to read, I liked that it was brief, and nicely written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This poem is short but the way you made it so brief reflects on what's happened. The peace that you wanted but never came for life is an adversary. Only we can deliver that peace.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Wonderful. Sets you up for a love poem, and in its way it is, then crashes and shakes your illusions. Great work

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Sbernie18
Sbernie18

Syracuse, NY



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Hey, I'm from Syracuse. I write poetry, lyrics, a few short stories and longer stuff. I try to be as active as possible and review what I can. I love reading new poems and stories everyday so send me .. more..

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