Just Passing the TIme

Just Passing the TIme

A Poem by Sbernie18

Whispering in silence you sit on the shore,

Moments run passing you’re asking for more.

Time won’t stop ticking when you ask her again,

Even this once fall asleep and suspend.

 

Sit for a run and breathe to be high,

Eat all the water and never comply.

Stop to arrest the peace from the crime,

Stop to erase their slowing decline

 

And when I try, I’ll try not to hide,

I’ll  try to replace if you try to decide.

I promise it can work, keep turning the key,

To open the door if you try to believe.

 

When I said, that what you heard,

But wasn’t true, like second to third

So just relax, and just be glad,

Don’t try to find, what you never had

 

So just get high, for once be alive,

Let’s smoke the world and, try to survive.

I take all the time to see through the day,

Pass of the clock, a melting hooray.

© 2011 Sbernie18


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Pass of the clock, a melting hooray.
Lovethat!
On the line before I would put the comma after world. Nice poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


i love the imagery, Great Job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very imaginative!
I love it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nice. Sometimes I feel like this, besides getting drunk you want to feel the weed take over so everything seems happy. Boredom can lead to it and that makes it a better happening.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Brilliant imagry and structure. Nice flow and 'shape' Liked it a lot

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Sbernie18
Sbernie18

Syracuse, NY



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Hey, I'm from Syracuse. I write poetry, lyrics, a few short stories and longer stuff. I try to be as active as possible and review what I can. I love reading new poems and stories everyday so send me .. more..

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