Sounds of Winter

 

 

Bitter cold nostalgia

Keeps me awake - I need this memory to fade.

So like the frost that bites at the skin,

Forever my bruised heart is broken.

 

There was no light in your blue eyes,

When the fires of desire that warmed us

Burned the colors of my world into ashes

Remains of black and grey.

 

I write away the pain you've caused,

As I revel in the sounds of winter.

The brutal silence that came from your lips,

Frozen within my thoughts.

 

Author's Note

Winter by ~WielkiBoo

Reviews

[J. J. Nightingale]

Forever my heart be broken ..

This is one of your best .. very well done .. I love it ..

For me, blue eyes always lied, and still left me wanting more ..

Jazz

[Taylor]

Excellence.

The only thing I would change is to remove "bruised" from the 4th line so that it becomes:
"Forever my heart is broken."

[Dr. Wood ?]

cleverly descriptive and honest

[Acropolix]

Remember, each winter will have his summer. Exquisite write, strings a chord in every heart.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is profound!...it is a vivid expression of your broken heart. To be frozen, void of love..with silence to remain, is brutal. Excellent write dear poetess!...You always amaze me!

"Bitter cold nostalgia

Keeps me awake - I need this memory to fade.

So like the frost that bites at the skin,

Forever my bruised heart is broken."

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Thank you, Robbie. :)