Bang.

A new thing I wrote last night just before creative hour.

Love,

But don't forget to hate

Laugh,

But only after tears

Dance,

Like everybody's watching

Live,

But die confronting fears.

 

Think in the mindset of Gods

But with power of droids

And all sense of direction

Is lost.

But learn all the steps

And dress to impress

And maybe you'll slow down

The rot.

 

'Cos princess,

I'm sorry,

You've lost all the wars

And the soldiers all died long ago.

But as you forget,

All that you've ever learnt,

You'll see this world's

Impossibly slow.

 

Author's Note

Iunno? This kinda happened during trying to write a new story but running outta patience and trying to draw but spilling ink all down my arm. -_-

Reviews

[Jasmine Parker.]

Jeez. I've got alot to live up to, eh?
Fecking marvellous.
I love the second verse bit. And I'm rather a fan of the artwork :P
xxxxx

[The Autumn Faerie]

This is a very good piece.
It's got great direction and it really offers a lot of morale!

Great work!
-Raye

[lauren emily]

You showed the good side of things, and the bad. This is a really great piece.
Nice work,
~Lauren