TREAT ME LIKE AN ELEMENT

TREAT ME LIKE AN ELEMENT

A Poem by CAPOLAVORO
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It is for you to find out. Play with your mind. Do not be an easy thinker.

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Treat me like the Earth
Keep stepping on my worth
Dig into my own wealth
Plant poisons do it stealth

Treat me like the Water
Satisfy your body in my honor
Quench the thirst of your desire
When your satisfied call me Sire

Treat me like the Fire
In my presence you shall admire
It's okay to be a liar
Play with me outside the wire

Treat me like the Air
After the heat the breeze will share
Breathing bodies in despair
Winds of love can now prepare

Treat me like the Ether
Sweet smelling reliever
Bloodless way of leisure
A liquid that can still put us in danger. 

© 2017 CAPOLAVORO


Author's Note

CAPOLAVORO
Still playing with words. Hoping for reviews maybe. I am still new at this one.

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I liked the poem. I liked how you used the elements. Good to conduct with the elements. I liked the description of each one. Thank you Capolavoro for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


CAPOLAVORO

7 Years Ago

Thank you also Cayote fr sharing your marvelous review. Your words are heaven sent from above. :)
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome dear Poet.
Well penned, very good elements of the nature is brilliant. Hope I read more like this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


CAPOLAVORO

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much. You' surely will. Like your picture by the way. :)
Farhan Shaikh

7 Years Ago

Oh, thank you
CAPOLAVORO

7 Years Ago

You're very much welcome.
Your comparision here with elements of nature are pretty good, of course I must say, You penned well...
Thank you for sharing..

Posted 7 Years Ago


CAPOLAVORO

7 Years Ago

Thank you for reading. I am just inspired by how the elements have been used and affect us.
I like the way you have beautifully compared yourself with the elements.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

Everyone have certain attachment with every poem they write.
CAPOLAVORO

7 Years Ago

Yes, Thank you for noticing mine. :)
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

You're welcome
You took the four elements into a new level. I love it. Keep going.

Posted 7 Years Ago


CAPOLAVORO

7 Years Ago

Thanks. You do well too.
great work....
it's really awsmm to read how you explained earth by your playing words....

Posted 7 Years Ago


CAPOLAVORO

7 Years Ago

Yes, I am glad you somehow get the meaning of this one. This shows how people use the elements we ha.. read more
It's good but I recommend to play with the rhyme scheme and rhythmic pattern some more. Write a limerick or something for practice.

Posted 7 Years Ago


CAPOLAVORO

7 Years Ago

Thank you. I will try next time then.

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Added on February 19, 2017
Last Updated on March 5, 2017
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CAPOLAVORO
CAPOLAVORO

Cebu, 7, Philippines



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