BEGGING

BEGGING

A Poem by CAPOLAVORO
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These are some words other people want to say towards someone before that someone say something that might hurt them.

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Don't say it yet
Please give me your forgiveness
Please give me time to accept it
Please give me lil happiness
Please give me time to admit

Don't say it yet
Please let me just hold your face
Please let me touch those pure lips
Please let me have not that space
Please let me have such great grips

Don't say it yet
Please don't leave me
Please don't throw me
Please don't stop me
Please don't forget


© 2017 CAPOLAVORO



Author's Note

CAPOLAVORO
I just want everyone to relate to it maybe.

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this is a great poem, thanks for sharing and please don't stop writing your heart out. great

Posted 1 Month Ago


Very thought provoking piece, and I totally agreed to it. Words can ruin someones lives if said in the wrong way...
Well done Capolavoro :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


CAPOLAVORO

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much for reading. :)
Words are so important when it comes to that one person. The wrong word at the wrong time can have real negative consequences. Hence one should always listen.

Posted 8 Months Ago


CAPOLAVORO

3 Months Ago

Listening is a must. Thank you so much for reading. :)
Great poem! I like how it could relate to multiple people and just one person at the same time! I'm excited to read more!

Posted 8 Months Ago


CAPOLAVORO

8 Months Ago

Thank you for taking a time to read my work. :)
Very deep and beautiful prayer. Your creation is very nice.

Posted 8 Months Ago


CAPOLAVORO

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much. :)
Une Saison en Enfer    1854--------------1891

8 Months Ago

You wellcome. I like it very much
CAPOLAVORO

8 Months Ago

I like how you like it too. :)
Yearning and beautiful...

Posted 9 Months Ago


CAPOLAVORO

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much. :)
A great poem. Simple and true!!!

Posted 9 Months Ago


CAPOLAVORO

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much Erica. :)
Removed

9 Months Ago

Your welcome!
An amazing poem. Totally felt it. Keep writing!

Posted 9 Months Ago


CAPOLAVORO

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much. I am glad you felt it. :)
Sonakshi Arora

9 Months Ago

My pleasure :)
Lovely poem ... I liked the feel of this poem :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


CAPOLAVORO

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much. :)
She saw it coming. Time to bale out.
Interesting take on predicting the future of a relationship in trouble.

Posted 9 Months Ago


CAPOLAVORO

9 Months Ago

Thank you so much. :) You have an interesting take for reviewing this one also. :)

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Added on March 6, 2017
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CAPOLAVORO
CAPOLAVORO

Cebu, 7, Philippines



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