SOUNDS OF ABUSE

SOUNDS OF ABUSE

A Poem by CAPOLAVORO
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Social issues are worthy to be explored.

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ARGH! ARGH!

I will not do it again
PLEASE!
Mother stop hitting


UGGH! UGGH!

We don't have money
PLEASE!
Don't kill my wife


AWK! AWK!

Ssto sstop choking
PLEASE!
I have a baby


SLAP! SLAP!

He raped me
PLEASE!
I did not seduce him


BWAK! BWAK!

Don't touch me
PLEASE!
Let me go
WHACK! WHACK!

You have no future
IDIOT!
You have no hope


RAT-A-TAT-TAT!  RAT-A-TAT-TAT!

Don't move
M**********R!
I'll kill you both


HAH! HAH!

That's not my baby
W***E!
Drugs is my baby


BLAH! BLAH!

You seduced him
S**T!
You're a homewrecker


SHH! SHH!

Let me have sex with you
B***H!
Don't move


© 2017 CAPOLAVORO


Author's Note

CAPOLAVORO
PAIN for red and COLD-HEARTED for blue. They are all connected and that is true. :)

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WOW!

As you know, I dont do that much poetry, so in saying that I would like to say that this poem in my eyes was very 'HARD HITTING' piece (excuse the pun, not meant to come across that way at all.

You made it even more EXTREME with the RED and BLUE.

Mark.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

CAPOLAVORO

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Mark. :) It is good to know that you like it.
matrixmark

6 Years Ago

Powerful piece.
I wish I could add more, but its just not my area.
Thank you for shari.. read more
CAPOLAVORO

6 Years Ago

I am actually focused on the Onomatopoeia. That is why I try to make it as short as possible. :)



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Drugs is my baby...

I have nothing to say..100/100

Posted 6 Years Ago


CAPOLAVORO

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Atashusi. :)
WOW!

As you know, I dont do that much poetry, so in saying that I would like to say that this poem in my eyes was very 'HARD HITTING' piece (excuse the pun, not meant to come across that way at all.

You made it even more EXTREME with the RED and BLUE.

Mark.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

CAPOLAVORO

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Mark. :) It is good to know that you like it.
matrixmark

6 Years Ago

Powerful piece.
I wish I could add more, but its just not my area.
Thank you for shari.. read more
CAPOLAVORO

6 Years Ago

I am actually focused on the Onomatopoeia. That is why I try to make it as short as possible. :)
I understand what you have tried to do in this one but for me it simply hangs together as a clunky collection of phrases related to traumatic events and lacks a purpose other than to remind us of some of the wrongs in the world and how some inflict suffering on others. I think you could expand each of the streams with a little more detail and flow and it might then have more artistic merit. Sorry!

Posted 6 Years Ago


John Alexander McFadyen

6 Years Ago

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CAPOLAVORO

6 Years Ago

I would love to. :)
John Alexander McFadyen

6 Years Ago

Let me know what you think please.
pain and cold heartedness was totally visible here!
amazing write up...
keep writing :D

Posted 6 Years Ago


CAPOLAVORO

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Shadowine. :)
To me, each of these are as cold blooded as the next. You've done well to point all this out. Things like these do come out in the open often, but the solution? Never... And that is what should be explored more.
Well penned, C! 👍

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

CAPOLAVORO

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Yumnakay. :) Yeah, this is reality and this should not be hidden. People has darkn.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

6 Years Ago

It is indeed. Being born a human and 'becoming' a human are two different things. Nice thoughts here.. read more
I Feeel Some Real Life Events Which Is Dark Full Of Abuse In This Poem..

Posted 6 Years Ago


CAPOLAVORO

6 Years Ago

Oh yes, it is definitely based on real life situations. I am glad you felt it. :)
Yeah they are all connected, as you said, simply these are all social issues explained in a single piece and well described...I honestly appreciate it..:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


CAPOLAVORO

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much Surya. :)
Surya

6 Years Ago

You are welcome dear friend...:)

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Added on April 7, 2017
Last Updated on April 8, 2017
Tags: #abuse, #pain, #suffering

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CAPOLAVORO
CAPOLAVORO

Cebu, 7, Philippines



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