Hope

Hope

A Poem by Asir Y.R
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Just something I came up with on the fly...enjoy!

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Let hope ring....

in the streets,
in the alleys,
in the markets,
in those desolate places,
those dark corners where demons lie
and poor, weary souls abide

Let hope ring...

For all is not lost yet

© 2016 Asir Y.R



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I simply love it that you have worded your personal thought. a very short and nice. Thanks for sharing

Keep writing.

Best
szhzia

Posted 10 Months Ago


That's very nice to read...keep it up😊

Posted 11 Months Ago


Asir Y.R

11 Months Ago

Thank you and I will :)
Indeed I like this, clear concise and full of conviction! Thanks for sharing your poetic soul!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Asir Y.R

11 Months Ago

Thank you for reviewing my writing :)
Asir Y.R

11 Months Ago

I'm glad that you enjoyed it :)
Your words speak so strongly into our world today. With so much darkness, so many cold hearts, it seems that we all need to rise in this beautiful sunrise of hope.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Asir Y.R

11 Months Ago

Thank you, I am glad that my words are relatable and have touched so many ppl :)
An owl on the moon

11 Months Ago

Please keep writing in the new year. :)
Asir Y.R

11 Months Ago

I definitely will :) and make sure you keep writing as well
It's a very humaistic thing to wish for hope for all. If hope is a seed then many things can grow from it, revolution, justice, equality, freedom, etc.
Without the seed - without any semblance of hope there is only despair - which is an abyss from which nothing can grow.
This is a real universal call - well done Rayanna.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Asir Y.R

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much Tony Jordan. Your review is greatly appreciated :)
I love the message of this piece and how you structured it. It reminded me of the last part of Martin Luther King's "I Have A Dream" speech in which he repeated the phrase "Let freedom ring." This poem had the same essence about it. It expresses an optimistic viewpoint while recognizing the harships of life. I felt like the last three lines of the second stanza conveyed this well ... may hope reach all.

- William Liston

Posted 12 Months Ago


Asir Y.R

12 Months Ago

Thank you, i didn't realize the similarities between my poem and Dr. King's speech. Thank you for y.. read more
Very uplifting and inspiring little piece.
Short and simple but wonderful and meaningful.
We should always try and have some hope :)
Thank you for sharing this :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Asir Y.R

1 Year Ago

You're welcome, and thank you for your comment. :)
cimmy wuv xxxooo

1 Year Ago

your welcome :)
What a beautiful thought. This uplifted me today. Thanks for sharing this.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Asir Y.R

1 Year Ago

Thank you for commenting.
nicely licked!
yeah. hope's all what we have now-a-days in this world even this whole freaking universe's based on this stupid world called "HOPE". i call it stupid cos, sometimes, it makes people feel so good esp. when they've lived up to their hopes, and in rest of the cases, it breaks many hearts down into pieces, perhaps, whatever it is, yes.. hope is all what we need to heal life, & walk the pavements of roads. kinda very inspirational poetry you bleed in. good work here!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Asir Y.R

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much!
Hopeful and cheerful words expressed. I like them. We need to embrace hope and go forward with happy heart. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Asir Y.R

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much!
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome Raysira.

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