Hope

Just something I came up with on the fly...enjoy!

Let hope ring....

in the streets,

in the alleys,

in the markets,

in those desolate places,

those dark corners where demons lie

and poor, weary souls abide

Let hope ring...

For all is not lost yet

Reviews

[SZHZIA]

I simply love it that you have worded your personal thought. a very short and nice. Thanks for sharing

Keep writing.

Best
szhzia

[Farhan Shaikh]

That's very nice to read...keep it up😊

[Sira YR]

Thank you and I will :)

[Michael X]

Indeed I like this, clear concise and full of conviction! Thanks for sharing your poetic soul!

[Sira YR]

Thank you for reviewing my writing :)

[Sira YR]

I'm glad that you enjoyed it :)

[An owl on the moon]

Your words speak so strongly into our world today. With so much darkness, so many cold hearts, it seems that we all need to rise in this beautiful sunrise of hope.

[Sira YR]

Thank you, I am glad that my words are relatable and have touched so many ppl :)

[An owl on the moon]

Please keep writing in the new year. :)

[Sira YR]

I definitely will :) and make sure you keep writing as well

[Tony Jordan]

It's a very humaistic thing to wish for hope for all. If hope is a seed then many things can grow from it, revolution, justice, equality, freedom, etc.
Without the seed - without any semblance of hope there is only despair - which is an abyss from which nothing can grow.
This is a real universal call - well done Rayanna.

[Sira YR]

Thank you so much Tony Jordan. Your review is greatly appreciated :)

[William Liston]

I love the message of this piece and how you structured it. It reminded me of the last part of Martin Luther King's "I Have A Dream" speech in which he repeated the phrase "Let freedom ring." This poem had the same essence about it. It expresses an optimistic viewpoint while recognizing the harships of life. I felt like the last three lines of the second stanza conveyed this well ... may hope reach all.

- William Liston

[Sira YR]

Thank you, i didn't realize the similarities between my poem and Dr. King's speech. Thank you for your review :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Very uplifting and inspiring little piece.
Short and simple but wonderful and meaningful.
We should always try and have some hope :)
Thank you for sharing this :)

[Sira YR]

You're welcome, and thank you for your comment. :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your welcome :)

[Pete]

What a beautiful thought. This uplifted me today. Thanks for sharing this.

[Sira YR]

Thank you for commenting.

[Adam Adams]

nicely licked!
yeah. hope's all what we have now-a-days in this world even this whole freaking universe's based on this stupid world called "HOPE". i call it stupid cos, sometimes, it makes people feel so good esp. when they've lived up to their hopes, and in rest of the cases, it breaks many hearts down into pieces, perhaps, whatever it is, yes.. hope is all what we need to heal life, & walk the pavements of roads. kinda very inspirational poetry you bleed in. good work here!

[Sira YR]

Thank you so much!

[Coyote Poetry]

Hopeful and cheerful words expressed. I like them. We need to embrace hope and go forward with happy heart. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sira YR]

Thank you so much!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Raysira.