Mr. Jack

Say what? Say Who?
ITS ONLY YOU!
Don’t stand up to me!
You are worthless!

What you gain in marksmanship you lack in experience! 
So take your damned crack shots!
Take two!
In the field the only shot you take is below my belt!

The captains always right!
But your childish!
Have you forgotten who you’ve been talking to?
Does it need to be said?
You’re a worthless drunk!
Hiding behind what you think is real!
So go to the lines and see what’s really worth drinking about!

You where raised in suburbia!
Not on the frontier!
We brought you here!
You’ve stabbed us in the back one last time!
So let’s see if you can take a shot!
A shot above the belt!

You’re a coward!
A fake!
A worthless son of nothing!

So take a shot! 
Take two!
But in a fight your only shot is below my belt!

Reviews

[Riley Mistwood]

nice job.

[frivolous treasures]

Wow... that's all I have to say (but in a good way, NOT in a sarcastic, rude way) This was really good! Very forceful and really punches reality... maika'i no, good job!!