Want

Want

A Poem by onestep

Want
To be loved
Children
Respect
More than on night
To be cherished
To not hurt
To not wonder
To be confident 
To live 
To not worry 

© 2019 onestep


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I was always told those that want dont get but your piece serves to act as a list for human needs.....basic but bold

Posted 2 Months Ago


Quite a stark piece which lacks any real feel for the subject in it's free verse form. Did you mean 'More than one night'? It does encourage the reader to inject their own interpretation in its bare bones simplicity and staccato style.

Posted 2 Months Ago



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Added on March 13, 2019
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