Turth hurts

Don't ask

I am sorry,
I was wrong,
Please don't come back tho,
I know I was wrong,
I am not sure if I will change the way I acted,
I know that I should not have done that,
But I had to get you off of me,

I know it hurt,
But the truth hurts,
Witch is why I am not gonna ask,
 My friends the truth,
I know I should of done something different,
or even better,

The truth hurts,
And don't not believe anything unless it hurts,
I am wrong Not right,
I was wrong but I was not right,
But I said the TRUTH

Author's Note

First try to make me feel better...
Reveal my emotions...
Tell me what you think...
yes I know the truth hurts but I'd love to hear...

Reviews

[Luna]

This is good but the coma overload is there. I like the point behind it, that everyone is wrong so you shouldn't judge off of that. Nice write.

[Dylan Patrick]

The first time I read this I was half-asleep, so I went back to bed. Then I woke up and read it again, and this review is based off the second time reading. I like the poem because it makes me think about whether it's right to tell the truth because of the potential hurt it may cause. Favorite line - And don't believe anything unless it hurts.

[Sexy P3nguin]

Great read