What I feel

What I feel

A Poem by VioletRose
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What I feel
I feel Pretty,
I feel Different,
A good Different,
I haven't felt this good in 4 years,
I was in 5th grade,
Now I am in 8th,
I bring Tears to my brown eyes,
My red-ish Brown short Greasy hair,
Waves with excitement,
My black tank top or original,
My red HSM Pj's brings back memories,
 I look at my school pictures from this year,
And I just say W0W I am pretty,
W0W I feel Different,
I feel Better,
No more Non positive Missy,
To begin a new day a new Missy,
A Better Missy I can gladly say it,
A better Missy and I am happy,
I am not gonna get mad at anyone
For calling me a name,
Or for I do not know but no more un-happy Missy,
Today was the start of a new Missy,
I don't care if any one calls me Melissa,
I won't correct them,
I'll let it go,
No more trying so hard to blend in,
Because I am special, Different,
And I don't care if I loose friends because,
I am not gonna kill myself,
Or break myself because of a Blog,
I am Melissa and I do not care,
That's what I needed to say. 

© 2010 VioletRose


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VioletRose
*smiles* W0W tell me

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This is another good poem though a but of a coma overload. Move some of them around and it will be amazing. (I'm sorry if I sound harsh with the comas. School is a monster when it comes to writing!) Great write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!
IT IS INDEED A HONOR TO HAVE YOU AS A FRIEND!
SIGNED, THE MUSIC MAN
I WOULD LIKE TO SEE SOME MORE 'WOW' FACTOR FROM YOU at:
thepoeticminds.com (poetry, literature and dreams)
and tell me more about your love affair with MUSIC.....

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Posted 14 Years Ago



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VioletRose
VioletRose

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Hey my name is Melissa Lanee. You can call me Missy.... Im a freshman, age 14. School years almost over. I hate the month of my birthday. July is the WORST month ever. I have A bad Heart. I love.. more..

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A Poem by VioletRose