my world

i see the world in colors and feeling and sound,

each word a flurry of music,

feelings showing proud,

colors blurring in a frenzied flight.

words dont just sound like words,

i hear them as a song,

highs and lows and music notes,

where others hear people drone on.

feelings flood me like a storm,

i feel all of my friends,

i know them better than they do,

when their emotions are my playground.

colors blind me with their brilliance,

they melt into a painting,

everything is smudged together,

in perfect floods of light.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A well written poem...I enjoyed it...:).................

[SyberRose]

Beautifully penned...Enjoyed reading...Rose

[Lexi Villanueva]

Wow this is beautiful I can relate -100