To My Lovely.

To My Lovely.

A Poem by Dream Catcher
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Trust is a key essential.

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Hello dear,
Don't worry for I am here,
With the deepest feelings so sincere.
Even if it doesn't seem true to you,
My trust for you is so true.
It flows stronger than the water in a river,
And it's everlasting so it won't wither.
It goes deeper than the Ocean's floor,
And it last all the way to my body's core.
Higher than the clouds in the wide sky,
But loud enough to make the silence die.
Not even the loudest of thunder and rain,
Could silence this trust and set it to pain.
My voice speaks the words your ears need,
To tell you I love you and to take me lead.
Stop crying and just breathe, relax,
As we cover up our painful tracks.
It was a bad day that we overcame,
And still bright is our heart's flame.
Nothing or no one can take you from me,
As two become one, we remain happy.

© 2011 Dream Catcher


Author's Note

Dream Catcher
Trust is a key essential. Even though it can get hurt in some situations, it always grows stronger. I love you Dayna.

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Very very nice, but did I honestly expect anything less?
You have amazing talent Josh, don't let it fade.

-Chan

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the imagery and how stable the entire poem felt. It was very soothing to read because it seems so strong, just to say things like that. Very reassuring, like the rock reminding the house built on it that its not going anywhere. Dumb analogy but I don't know how else to explain it. Its nice to see how dedicated both you and Dayna are to the relationship. I love both of you! Thank you for this write.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 24, 2011
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Dream Catcher

Kenosha, WI



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