Still Quiet Prayer

I hate this piece!

 

 

 Everyday for four weeks,

 

I held her hand.

I watched as the cold shadows

of that horrid white room

seeped into her body,

 

until the sweet hand

I held went frigid.

 

My still quiet prayer

was finally answered.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Salvatore Buttaci]

You are one good poet, my friend. This hit like a stone!

Sal

[Lapierre]

I think the styling in the format is a bit unnecessary and may even detract from the piece. Otherwise I think it's great in its simplicity. It seems very personal, and very thought provoking.