As strong as a rock

The words may seem

strange

But know you'll be

tamed

 

I miss the tender words

that gave me hope and inspiration

For they made me feel like this

the love and admiration

 

I miss the long nights

we wrote together

Taking me to new heights

Even in the cold weather

 

A writer's message

giving truth and admiration

with respect to one's

direction

                                                                                        
strong and pure

always wanting to

hear more

 

A writer's love
as strong as a rock

with her caring

devotion

 

Author's Note

Needed to edit this to :)

Reviews

[UnderCompulsion]

This poem is really good. I like it! Very nice write. I like the flow! Thank you for writing it :)))

[Carl Drake Barnard]

It's my plesure as long as you like it I'm happy :)

[Robert Lindsay]

It has a good reflective mood all through, appreciative and hopeful.
First stanza is a statement /assertion ' know you'll be tamed' or is it a typo.. I know.. ?

Stanza 2 and 3 are full grammar and then 4 and 5 and 6 are short and spare - note form.
So maybe you cut them all down spare, chop out the ' I miss.. etc and condense all the stanzas tighter like 4, 5 and 6.

Just my 2 cents

[Carl Drake Barnard]

more a statement,to the heading of course,i wrote know you'll be tamed so that readers could spare their understanding on the topic until they've read the poem. then you'd know what it ment-a little-. As for stanza 456,i wrote it like this-form again,stanza 23 is on their own like a writer starts to tipe"full". But stanza 456 is seperate like the writer starts to write for/to somebody then in time the words get easier to say to the person like imagin writing a love poem to someone and you give it to them later You will say the words I love you-the words get easier so the stanza must stay in the form in order for me to hint it out-forms also has words. As for the I mis,i know to us when starting two stanzas the same it feels like the whole poem should be written out starting wth that same line,but here the writer puts his personal feelings in with the poem to make it more effectife?? hope I ain't confusing you now and know i always appreciate your reviews and i love when you want to know something :)

[Pryde Foltz]

Nice tight piece. Enjoyed the read.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

thank you :)