The place

The place

A Poem by Carl Drake Barnard
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This is about a dream I had :)

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The Place

 

There is a place

Where my mind always rest

And I have to fight

To embrace the light

 

I sit and appreciate

The world around us

As your beauty   

Enhances my insights

 

A lucid place

Where I still follow your trace

A place where everyone comes together

Helping me to end this race

 

I stop and embrace

As you look at me

My soul sinks to the ground

Loving you still

 


© 2014 Carl Drake Barnard



Author's Note

Carl Drake Barnard
BEtter :)

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Like your poem "The Lovers of God" there is a continuation of though and spirit here.
My mother always tells me of her rejoice in the gospel. Yet I do understand what she means
she is speaking metaphorically of the bible as a tool of investigation relevant to her case.
Religion means a shared investigation not a shared pathology. Wonderfully spoken my friend.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Carl Drake Barnard

3 Years Ago

Wow lovely :) I really appreciate your review and the time you took to read it :) thank you lovely* .. read more
Well...hopefully that place keeps going for you..
and this is a testament of that euphoria that you have for it...
just has that feel as I read the work...

Posted 3 Years Ago


Carl Drake Barnard

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the review my friend :)
Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

you're welcome...
This is such a lovely and ethereal write..

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carl Drake Barnard

3 Years Ago

You have my Eternal thanks for such a pleasant review hehe

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Added on August 14, 2014
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Carl Drake Barnard
Carl Drake Barnard

South Africa



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Hi,I am Carl. I'm a Chef and a writer. I am melancholy-Rage writer as the past have said. And I am like this in real life. I write what I know and stay true to feelings as I discover them in life. more..

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