Heavenly Bond

Heavenly Bond

A Poem by Carl Drake Barnard

This is a story poem About a child that goes through Life. Enjoy :)


Heavenly Bond


From the depths of life

A child was born

Kept alone by all his strife

A light was torn


His heart slowly became tainted

A lingering soul

Left alone taken by all his hatred

And lost control


His world consumed in Darkness

A driven Sadness

Giving in to the madness

A man giving up


Until the day he had met her

A saving spirit

Free from the world

And Love was born

© 2014 Carl Drake Barnard

Author's Note

Carl Drake Barnard
Hope you guys enjoy this one its almost close to my lost by pain :) Enjoy!!

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A quick write of a story...unravels quite fast..
...but that's the point in it...since you write it in a poem...
the beginning the conclusion and the finale...
all grouped into one collective...
and this one has a happy ending...
which is presumed by how it ends...

Posted 3 Years Ago

Carl Drake Barnard

3 Years Ago

Yap :) Thanks again for all your reviews brother I will get back to you as soon as I can :)
Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

you're welcome...
I like the form you took with these beautiful sentiments. Nicely done, Carl!

Posted 3 Years Ago

Carl Drake Barnard

3 Years Ago

Thank you lovely :)
A profound, poignant, and absolutely wonderful piece of poetry

Posted 3 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carl Drake Barnard

3 Years Ago

Really I had NO Idea! thanks for sharing this wonderful review :) Epicness *
Great message inside your words! Nice ending, too. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago

very intesive and interising writing. i like how you put hope on the end . this realy make me happy .

Posted 3 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on August 14, 2014
Last Updated on August 14, 2014
Tags: Bond, love, sadness, sorrow, hatred, pain


Carl Drake Barnard
Carl Drake Barnard

South Africa

Hi,I am Carl. I'm a Chef and a writer. I am melancholy-Rage writer as the past have said. And I am like this in real life. I write what I know and stay true to feelings as I discover them in life. more..


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