The Lovers of God

The Lovers of God

A Poem by Carl Drake Barnard

The lovers of God

 

Deep within their souls

Two are formed alike

Riding to the depths

Saving one another

Caring for one another

As their souls combine

They formed one of God's greatest

The lovers of God.

 

These are ones formed by God's intent

Irresistible to their sweet reflect

Opened to the world with open arms

Embracing all children of god's intervention

A loving embrace they can't escape

Ensnared by emotions they've both declared

And as they resonate

Their souls collide.

 

Linking them together

As one forever

But not by love

But by lust


And soon their eyes

Start to tell the lies

Captivated by other lovers

They start to deflect.

 

With time their anger ignites

Soon there is nothing left but lies

As their hatred drive them apart

They start to indulge lust

And resentfully they divide

And there lusts resides

As they fall in love with

The lovers of God.



© 2014 Carl Drake Barnard



Author's Note

Carl Drake Barnard
A poem I needed to write Enjoy! Cant wait on your thoughts!! :) Before you point out the God part if you are a religeos person you should know God lets everything happens for a reason and you learn something from it but it depends what you take from it*

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this makes me think of ones in love
and then they wrongly go after another
they have a affair and or are infatuated with another
then it turns into lust as lust isn't love it isn't pure love it is
going after someone you can't have.



And soon their eyes

Start to tell the lies

Captivated by other lovers

They start to deflect.




Thank you for sharing this piece and
for your lovely review and comments
you left on my page.


Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carl Drake Barnard

3 Years Ago

Any time and thank you for this amazing review Really appreciate it! :)
Benita c Staebelll - KindredPoet

3 Years Ago

You're welcome. thank you I enjoyed the read. Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet



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Nicely done the form certainly helps to create atmosphere.
Souls colliding is a beautiful description of deep meaningful long lasting love. Anything other is temporary at best. Passionately written with conviction I can appreciate that. R xo

Posted 11 Months Ago


Carl Drake Barnard

11 Months Ago

Thank you for reading!
I enjoyed this poem, Carl. It is true that when God unites two souls, the bond is deeper...they are tied with love. When the bond is nothing but lust, it cannot last. I am not sure I believe in true love...love that lasts a lifetime...but some do. Some find it. I hope you're one of the lucky few. Great poem, and I loved the visuals and font creativity, as well.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Carl Drake Barnard

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much for reading and the awesome review! :)
"Captivated by other lovers

They start to deflect.



With time their anger ignites"

Posted 11 Months Ago


This is full of energy and passion, especially with the twist from love to lust which I wasn't expecting in the beginning lines. Excellent write!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Carl Drake Barnard

2 Years Ago

Thank you for reading :)
The way this transforms and goes back again...in the write...
I see the beginning the testimony seems to be love ---
only to fall apart for some reason(s) and finds itself again...
may be not with the same person(s) -- but a different partner...
in doing so finds love in its truer form...
with that person...just how life is at times...

Posted 3 Years Ago


Carl Drake Barnard

3 Years Ago

Thank you man for your awesome review :)
Glen Yumang Manese

3 Years Ago

you're welcome...
this makes me think of ones in love
and then they wrongly go after another
they have a affair and or are infatuated with another
then it turns into lust as lust isn't love it isn't pure love it is
going after someone you can't have.



And soon their eyes

Start to tell the lies

Captivated by other lovers

They start to deflect.




Thank you for sharing this piece and
for your lovely review and comments
you left on my page.


Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carl Drake Barnard

3 Years Ago

Any time and thank you for this amazing review Really appreciate it! :)
Benita c Staebelll - KindredPoet

3 Years Ago

You're welcome. thank you I enjoyed the read. Blessings. Benita/ kindred poet
Well penned, I liked the cyclical aspect of this - falling in love, and out of love to fall in love again. Nicely done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Carl Drake Barnard

3 Years Ago

Thanks lovely for an awesome review :)
I would believe this a true story
as for god, well who can say.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Carl Drake Barnard

3 Years Ago

Like they say everything happens for a reason question is always what do you get out of it. :) thank.. read more
I took my time with this piece and added all my experiences from the last 4 months. And I honestly have to admit I didn't notice how much I got in this $ months in one poem talk about an epic experience :) And I thank you all for reading it!! :) And for those that haven't enjoy!! :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sensational and passionate. Absolutely love this poem! Excellent job :D

Posted 3 Years Ago


Carl Drake Barnard

3 Years Ago

Hehe thank you lovely :) really appreciate your review :)
Norah

3 Years Ago

my pleasure

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Carl Drake Barnard
Carl Drake Barnard

South Africa



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Hi,I am Carl. I'm a Chef and a writer. I am melancholy-Rage writer as the past have said. And I am like this in real life. I write what I know and stay true to feelings as I discover them in life. more..

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