Mercades Tales

Mercades Tales

A Poem by Los3

I just don't understand. I understand how she can keep goin. Like why did she come this far ? How does she manage the emotions in heart ? Like what kind of spark goes on inside her mind ? Like what really goes on in your mind ? And I don't know but from what I've been told how could your mom gone on if she had already known. Whats worse the fact that this was rehearsed or that your own mom was coerced to ruine you ? Like how are you supposed to know if someone really loves you if everyone you've ever known was cruel ? So your broke and without hope and the rope around your neck was easier for you to pull through ? Like this wasn't s**t compared to what you had to deal with. But see that where I come into place not just to guide you through the way but let you know your important not just to me but your family. Maybe just maybe it was ment to be ? Like you and me can see where we need the most stability. I cant imagine that happen like your father took your life like I understand why you cut yourself with a knife. Like thats not right , how did you make it through the night ? Like every stroke gave you a lump in your throat an shocked like this my pop why is he on top get the f**k off. I'm your see why daddy our you molestan me ? if anything your suppose to be the most trustworthy. I don't know if I would've done the same. But thats what makes you strong after all this is your song. A life tell of a girl who went through hell. But I guess you can say I responded to the yell an sadly these arn't just your tales. Mo so many others have heard the same bells. And the intentions of that man I can never understand. Like how could you have put your hands together to make this horrible plan. They say not to judge, but how am I suppose not to hold a grudge if you ruined her Love. - 2LoS1 

© 2017 Los3


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ern
Holy crap. I had my guitar with me and started strumming as I read this but wow. The only thing is that you should probably fix the grammar and organize it a bit better.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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this is amazing. i like it

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Los3

7 Years Ago

Thanks I'm a rapper and most of my raps contain real life s**t the rap nowadays is all about bitchie.. read more
Angel of the devil

7 Years Ago

thats cool!

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Los3
Los3

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