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A Poem by Carol Maric

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© 2008 Carol Maric



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hey !

thx for stepping by and reading that small piece Times.
Hope your world is smiling at you,

ciao, lara

Posted 10 Years Ago


wow, carol... my wounded reason was bleeding all over this... with SUPPHeRing eRotiic PowwAreFilled ... this dissonanced my neurons to the flower of happenstance meaning ...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Your poetry is art both lyricially and graphically. You weave thoughts and images like no one else I have ever seen.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I'm not sure what goes on in the layouts of your pieces... it's original I guess.. but makes the poem quite difficult to read... That kind of works against you on here.. because I want to read and review as many pieces as I can on here... not spend 3 hours deciphering one poem

On the other hand.. If I owned one of your poetry books.. I would be more inclined to spend time pondering over it..
good.. from what I could make of it? :}
x

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

how long?

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

hello carol ! i was here my dear. but it didn t show anything? error ? I was here again. ha ha. Now I wrote about this in your comment section. Enjoyed very much. congrat!! hug.

luv, lara

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I still haven't caught on altogether when read this type style. It is very hard for me to understand. I can see the flow and find it easy but the style interfears with that flow. I will never stop trying to understand your style. You have been so good to me in my learning and believe I will never forget that. Your Dear Friend Gary

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Carol Maric
Carol Maric

And then went down to the ship, Set keel to breakers, forth on the godly sea, and . . . Ezra Pound (TCOEP).



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