Scriptio Continua

Reviews

[Brett Campaigne]

i may be oversimplifying myself in seeing this poem as splaying the fallacies of the scientific attack in thier over simplification.

Scriptia Continua qua title
reminds me of Kierkegaard's
'Concluding Unscientific Postscript'

if i understand this poem more it may make me laugh like i did when i read that essay

[Watson Trippy]

What a head scratcher. It's definitely a style of writing I haven't seen for a while. It's good in it's complexity and the reader really has to think about what is being said.I don't think I understood the whole meaning but it's good to get the brain working once in a while.Great job.

[Brian K. Walters]

The complexity and unique appeal this piece has is amazing. This is a great write. It stimulates my mind and inspires me to want to write a little deeper myself :)

[Armon Badill]

I've seen this somewhere, but it wasn't in Nabakov or Orhan Pamuk, my two fav's at the moment, :) Would you mind if you have time take a look at my chapter 1, novel, ? I'll look at more of yours as well of course :) ty :)

[James Horsley]

Don't quite get it, but nice all the same. It's good sometimes to read a piece that you don't quite understand; although I can sort of get this. Well written though, very well written.

[Ruejacobs]

i don't get it.
doesn't mean i don't like it.
especially the Wonderlanders part.
very e e cummings on the surface.
but only on the surface.
it looks like it could be fun.
the way olympic ice skating looks like fun.
and just as easy.

[L. Hawley]

lifting the viels of the mind.. i feel a synergist of enery immaculating above the clouds.. this is wonderful in so many ways.. thank you for invigorating life, this is truely awe inspiring : ) God Bless

[M. Andre Vancrown]

A mind-boggling take on pairs of opposites, processes, changing states of awareness, lack of awareness, desire FOR awareness, and things that seperate, things that join, written almost like a script executed on an application server. I get the sense that you're asking us to change the way we live, how we execute our tasks, and embrace a way or method that is more natural, and if I may go so far, spares the planet our excesses. Brings us into harmony. With each other and with our deepest instincts. Eschew obfusication.

I haven't seen anything quite like this before. It's a gift.

M~

[Moonlight]

*gentle smile*

I just read Kufu's review of your work.

I will be back Carol, (I see many things I want to explore, but I am too tired to appreciate such a cerebral journey...right now? "roses are red, violets are blue" is right about my level)

Please know this�

I find your work as aesthetically pleasing and intellectually stimulating as always (as I have come to associate with �you�) but I am not up to delving into the intricate and beautiful pathway you have constructed and shared with this piece.

I will honor your vision another day, please forgive my ignorance.

Sincerely,
Moonlight.

[Gandré]

Caarool ! I loved this.

You play with our intelligence and you made
the Wo+Man thing a powerful tale of nerve-shattering suspense.
hugs, yours lara.