Allowance of Destiny

Allowance of Destiny

A Poem by forfila

Tell me who you are
Tell me the secrets of your past

I will never harbor thoughts other than understanding
I will never turn my back, no matter what your words may reveal
I will never change for you, I know what your heart entails

I wish to go as far as destiny will allow us
Love, no lust, spring time, hugs and flowers.

© 2008 forfila


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This is truly a lovely piece. Beautifully penned. Great job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


"Love, no lust, spring time, hugs and flowers."

Yeah for hugs and flowers! It is not all about guns and torture any more! Great work.

-Gabe


Posted 16 Years Ago


I agree with Cynthia. That was my favorite part also. I think that everyone wants to be loved for themselves and not for just what they can give someone whether it be thier body or gifts. this concept was very nicely captured.
Thank you for sharing.
Love All, Mejasha

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I wish to go as far as destiny will allow us
Love, no lust, spring time, hugs and flowers.

I love this part especially :) very nice. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love is special and you show the way there in your beautifully written poem!
"I will never harbor thoughts other than understanding
I will never turn my back, no matter what your words may reveal
I will never change for you, I know what your heart entails"
These words of yours are so tender, hard to find in real life.
Excellent write!


Posted 16 Years Ago


you have a way with words! Another remarkably sweet and endouring work of love and art.
But i think you ment to say in line 4 "may reveal" not "my" :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

this is a sweet little poem.

it is short, sweet and to the point.

i love it!

A

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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