Problem of the World

Beneath the earth I can feel it.
Please listen to the world.
The answer is in the reading.
A book revealing the problems.
The troubled things we can fix.
We are human and have the power.
Open your eyes to the darkness we've made.
Everyone has peeked once but refuse to believe it.
The problem has been eternal for centuries.
Reiterated until now that we have found it.

Author's Note

Contest writing. Reviews pretty please :)

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I like this very much, because I agree that us humans have the power to fix these problems. We are also the ones that caused them too. But no what must of us just do is sit around and let everything cave in and continue to get worse. As every generation goes by, the problem does seem to grow more and more. No one will listen to the world how Earth is calling out for us to help! Great job, I hope you placed in the contest. You deserve it :)


Ashley Rivers-- Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you :)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

You're welcome!! :)

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Great Poem, so well done.

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you :)

[Helena]

Very nice use of the "Ten" in this interesting poem. Thank you for submitting to the contest ~ Helena

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you :)

[Cristina Moldoveanu]

Interesting point of view. I wrote my entry after you and it seems they are similar :) Only now I read your poem. It is not exactly the same thing but I guess those words lead to similar impressions in different minds.

[Heromen Selena]

That's kind of cool :) Thanks for reading mine!