Fluffy Teddy Bear

I love teddy bears. Mine recently got so torn up that I had to throw them away. I thought I would honor him in a poem.

My fluffy teddy bear
So old and torn
From me hugging you
On all the days I'm scared

My fluffy teddy bear
So used and scratched
From me abusing you
On all the days I'm angered

My fluffy teddy bear
So worn and faded
From me squeezing you
On all the days I'm heart-broken

My fluffy teddy bear
So high on my shelf
You protect me there
From all the monsters in my room

My fluffy teddy bear
So packed and shipped
To my new home
Where you watch over me

Reviews

[SamanthaDanielle]

This is adorable! While I was reading this, I looked over at my roommate who was holding her old, torn teddybear. Everyone loves their teddybear!

[Heromen Selena]

Thanks :)

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Adorable! I have a teddybear too :)

[Rhea752]

sooo cute. :P

[Iris Eve Baynard.]

i love this poem, :)

[Amberway]

I thought this was a really cute poem. It reminds me and I think anyone who reads it, of their childhood.

[Hidden Happiness]

this is really beautifully amazing....the joy of having someone so close to you even in the toughest of times...and though it doesn't have a life...it just makes things easier than a human being.....i love teddy bears and i have a lot of them and i never ever wanna let them go:).

[Chris]

Lil bits and pieces of whom we are follow us all our lives.

[~Lizzy♬]

I loved how you used the symbolism of the teddy bear. Wonderful job! It's really good. :)

~Lizzy~

[Dawn D]

I really like this one! The symbol of something you've treasured throughout the years that has gotten you through joys as well as pains...yup, I relate!

[Ink Angel]

So precious! every child has one a toy, a blanket my eighteen yr old still has her blanket. So well writtern.