Rain

It was raining earlier so I thought I would write about it.

Drip Drip Drip of a rain drop
Plop Plop Plop on my face
Puddles everywhere
On the cobble stone

Squish Squish Squish as I walk
Splash Splash Splash on my legs
Water coating everything
Purging my heart

I breathe out just to see steam
Come from my chapped lips
Feel God's tear drops
On my skin

Reviews

[Poet Sayings]

the requim of a refreshing sense newness, the play on wording is vibrant
and draws the poem to an artisitc realm of expression, emotive and creative.

[no sun]

Beautifully written. Just an amazing write! I enjoyed the concept and your use of rain/tears.

[Maryam]

It's simple, yet absolutely amazing! Well done!

[Amberway]

I loved this! It was so surreal. It put a perfect picture in your head from the description. I loved the word choice you used also.

[Amenti Amaris Raven]

Beautiful!!!!! I love the use of raion as a cleansing tool instead of just a symbol for sorrow!! I love this!!!!

[♪Kinnixk ♫]

I enjoyed reading this. Lightly written and beautiful :)

[Whiskurz]

Very well written.....I enjoyed.....Whisk

[Berkeley Street Writer]

A very nice poem about rain. Well done. I do enjoy rain as long as I'm not out in it! Rain purges and cleanses all things it touches.

[...and some ideas.]

NOT BAD...LITE AND FAST...YOU SURVIVED IT..IT SEEMS :)

[MOON]

Lovely write , something about rain cleansing!