Man up or Woman up.

Man up or Woman up.

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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Tire of people who have too much time to cry and complain.

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Man up or Woman up.

I'm tire of hearing about Tate.
This is a poetry site.
For words to be enjoyed.

Tire of the crying, moaning and useless words.
This isn't a message center.
Need a hot date.
Find a dating service.

Living, dying and trying to spread separation.
Just move on.
Man up or Woman up.
No room for tender hearts.
I asked for honest opinions.
I been told. Learn to write by the best writer's on the site.

I Man's up.
Tried to write better.
Thank you for the honest reviews.
Want no negative words or review.
Leave comment and rating deleted.

If Hemingway was alive.
He would tell you.
Man up and learn to accept criticism with a open mind.

No-one like a crybaby.

Tate is a good man. He isn't perfect.
I'm far from a perfect writer.
I write on most of my poetry.

Never too old to learn.
Please assist a old writer with mistakes.
I accept the help with thankfulness.

                       Coyote


© 2013 Coyote Poetry



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Author's Note

Coyote Poetry
Time to become a writing site again. Not a popularity contest or a bitch session..

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I found this poem ironic...
It is a poem that becomes a personal rant. The very thing your poem is attacking.
The grammar give me the flavor of cultural dialect instead of "proper" English and I will assume that was your intent.
I had to smile at this circle of human behavior...
We are so much alike and we have so much trouble admitting it.
I understand you premise and I understand your frustrations, but I love this site. The good, bad and the ugly. This is human interaction with a lot of the filters removed. It is bound to get messy from time to time.
Keep writing your heart and this will be a writing site...

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Always moves me to read you, you have such a balance of life within your work, just wonderful! :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice one......yup it is time to become a writing site again!!!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This piece definitely addresses one of the issues I've seen from some writing on this site.
Grammatically, it wasn't the strongest piece you've done, but it still had your unique rhythm. Thank you for posting this.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this Coyote! When I read this, one word popped in my head "Acceptance'. Thanks for sharing this awesome writing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Those who write want to be acknowledged. Words aren't useless.Misused, certainly. Misinterpreted, naturally but thats the way it always is isn't it. For everyone writing is a particular experience and grouping them together in one place will cause those experiences to collide. A human condition is that at some point someone is going to say what distresses them. So people are going to complain and are going to cry. I think if you joined this site then you are going to have to deal with other people's experiences. That's learning.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I couldn't agree more, my friend, thank you ever so much for writing and sharing this, Coyote. Well said :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I've just joined and I'm still very excited about uploading my poetry to a forum that allows other writers to view and review it.

I like the irony in your words; to complain about people complaining in this form is interesting but your grammar needs some improvement. I am looking forward to seeing more of your work.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I found this poem ironic...
It is a poem that becomes a personal rant. The very thing your poem is attacking.
The grammar give me the flavor of cultural dialect instead of "proper" English and I will assume that was your intent.
I had to smile at this circle of human behavior...
We are so much alike and we have so much trouble admitting it.
I understand you premise and I understand your frustrations, but I love this site. The good, bad and the ugly. This is human interaction with a lot of the filters removed. It is bound to get messy from time to time.
Keep writing your heart and this will be a writing site...

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I enjoyed the poem, the sentiment and the rythym. Not perfect yet but good but read before you post, a couple of letters are missed out. Thanks for posting it, I agree with your sentiments and the poem is original.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

Thank you for the review. No perfect writer. Just people trying to get better.
Shaunton

4 Years Ago

To be honest, no writer is going to be a perfect writer or perfect Grammar instructor. Sometimes the.. read more
I enjoyed the sentiments and I liked the rythym. If you want to learn, you are learning. The poem works. Not perfect but good and original. Thanks.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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